Ursa Major (Bear) Constellation map, Source: wikipedia |
“Once there was a young woman with many
suitors, but she refused to marry. She had seven brothers and one little
sister. Their mother had been dead many years and they had no relatives, but
lived alone with their father.”
Her name was Seke. Her brothers had
tried to get her to fall in love with one of their friends. They had held
competitions to see who could bring Seke the biggest deer that they had shot
down with their bows. Many men had lined up and proclaimed how mesmerized they
were by her beauty; how they could not imagine anyone else being her husband.
And Seke was beautiful. The eldest
sister resembled their mother, who had passed in a tragic accident right after
the youngest sister was born. She had big brown eyes and thick black hair that
hung long to the small of her back. Her skin was made tan and rough from the
long days spent in the sun.
One day, the little sister was bored
picking berries and decided to follow her oldest sister while she was getting
wood from the forest. The little sister followed Seke far into the forest where
the thickest trees began to keep the rays of the sun from shining through. She
could just make out the form of her older sister in front of her. She began to
wonder why Seke would come so far into the forest just for wood when she saw a
large black bear emerge from behind one of the trees and walk towards Seke. The
little sister was frightened and was about to scream out when she saw her older
sister lean in and hug the bear. They caressed while the younger sister stood
in shock at what she was seeing. When she collected herself enough to move, she
sprinted all the way back to the house.
Upon arriving at home, the little
sister told the seven brothers and father of what she had seen. Seke and the
bear were lovers. The father and brothers grew angry and now knew why Seke
would not take any of the suitors they had arranged as her husband.
When Seke returned from gathering wood
in the forest, she could see something was wrong with her brothers and father.
They told her of their knowledge of her bear lover. The siblings wanted to meet
him. If she did not oblige to this, they would kill him. Seke was distraught
that her secret had been revealed, and she knew her family would not approve of
her marriage to a bear. She cried herself to sleep that night, but knew the
next day she would have to bring her family to the bear.
The next day, Seke, her seven brothers,
and her younger sister ventured into the forest to find the bear that she
claimed as her lover. Seke was nervous and did not know how the meeting would
unfold. They traveled deep into the forest until the sun disappeared and the
trees were thick. Seke went ahead of her family and called to her lover to come
out of his cage. He approached Seke slowly and a gentle smile spread across his
black lips on his bristly face. But then he growled and stood up on his hind
legs, towering over Seke. He was a black beast with fury in his eyes. Seke did
not expect her lover to be that furious with her for bringing her family to see
him. She turned around to apologize to her family, when she saw why he was
raging and growling.
There stood her family with loaded
arrows pointed at the bear, ready to kill him. As her family began to charge
towards her lover with arrows ready and he began to charge towards her family
with teeth showing and claws out, Seke began to cry. Her family or her lover
would die if she could not do something to stop them. But the fury in their
eyes showed there was no peaceful solution.
Seke closed her eyes and said to
herself “may they be in the only safe place I know, where no human or animal
can harm them” And with that her seven brothers and younger sister disappeared from
the forest. She was left alone in the forest with her lover, the bear, and they
lived a happy life together.
And as for her siblings, they were cast
into the sky in the shape of a bear. The little brother is the North Star. The
six brothers and the little sister are seen in the Great Dipper. The little
sister and eldest brother are in a line with the North Star, the little sister
being nearest it because she used to carry her little brother on her back. The
other brothers are arranged in order of their age, beginning with the eldest.
This is how the seven stars came to be.
Author’s Note: This retelling comes
from The Bear Woman. In the original story there is a quarrel between the
eledest sister and her siblings when they find out she is in love with a bear.
The eldest sister becomes angry with them and turns into a bear to kill them.
She kills four of her brothers and then one of the eldest brothers finlly
shoots her in the head with an arrow and kills her. The brother then brings the
four dead brothers back to life and with no family left, they decide they have
nothing left on earth and decide to live in the sky. I kept the idea of the
woman being in love with the bear the same but changed how the siblings came to
be the constellation in the sky. I thought it was a happier ending, and made it
more interesting that the sister wanted to protect both her family and her
lover, so she cast them into the sky. The name Seke means black and I thought
it was appropriate as a black bear.
Bibliography: The Bear-Woman. Tales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson (1929).
I think that you did a great job with retelling this story this week! I really liked how thorough your authors note was, I think that it is so useful to do this because then you are allowing the reader a great insight on what the actual story was about! I like that you decided to change the end to be more joyful! I also really think it is great that you did that in order to put your own spin on the story! Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteWow, you turned a really depressing story into a fairly happy one quite well. This story reads pretty smoothly and the details are pretty solid. There isn’t a ton of imagery, but you describe everything in a basic enough way to where it’s easy to picture what’s going on. More importantly, the story is engaging and the conflict easy for one to get invested in. It’s amazing what point of view can do to make us root for causes we’d never thought we’d root for, like a bear getting the girl.
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